dfgrv8090 发表于 2023-7-20 17:32   全显示 1楼
我感觉总体上有点假，有点像是以那种起点的思路在写，就是特意的加上了涩情的描述，背景和人物刻画不丰满，整体节奏太快，堕落的毫无铺垫，像是催眠的那种堕落，没有突出女主的挣扎，没有那种女主努力期望摆脱的挣扎和堕入地狱的侧面描写，不过整体还是很棒的，作者估计也是看了很多这种文，然后糅合了很多，是个很好的开始，加油！


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